星期一, 5月 28, 2007

Effects of Technology

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Effects of Technology??
This world's going forward to tread quickest thing is science and technology, what science and technology rely on is the progress of[with] technique.For example say the computer is a science and technology of technique, the time-consuming work we need before now all depend on computer of science and technology lets us simplify matters a lot, also saving much time, so we can own more techniques that time improves present, let science and technology in this world more simplify matters more environmental protection. ?? The computer brings our convenience to have a lot, for example say the computer will bring our fast operations, analyzing a successful probability for us, providing us to carry on a recreational activity.? The computer will also bring many bad things, for example say over a long period of time use a computer will cause near sight, over a long period of time use a computer will also cause many people indulge lazy have to study or exercise in the electronic game, depending on a computer too will also cause our heads consider gradual degeneration. Although the computer will bring various injury,I believe future science and technology still keep overcoming this kind of problem.On the medical treatment use if there are no the words of computer, that didn't save the person's science and technology so, the not accurate medical treatment technique would cause more people's dead and injured, what we need is correct usage science and technology, not abuses science and technology.

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Experimenting the certificate shampooes to use not to use shampoo difference not big

The research of Australia finds shampooing uses not to use shampoo, in fact the difference isn't big.
When lead a British parliamentarian, write column to claim for the Times now, he already 20 years, only use water to never shampoo with the shampoo, for all that, he still owns a health sheen, have no the hair of strange smell, this the news let Australia broadcast the company abrupt fantasy, they held a challenge not to use the activity of shampoo, finding 500 much personal, carry on six weeks of experiment, in the process, they can only shampoo with the clear water, can not use shampoo or any detergent of other forms, after six weeks end, be up to 86% people to say, although do not shampoo with the shampoo, their hair looks, smell, all with usage the shampoo shampoo to have no difference, only 14% people think to sweep hair indispensability shampoo.

The world warms/boil water with the air? The NTU green house high-tech province gives or gets an electric shock 50%

The weather is hotter and hotter, everyone uses an electricity to also use more more fierce, but the green house light of NTU depend on geomancy and solar energy, can save 50% use an electricity above, and what to use is an air to boil water, don't use gas completely in house, connect swimming pool of water drinks after canning also filter, can say is a high-tech environmental protection house completely.
The gray and dynamoelectric curtain starts, keeping brightness inside the house is miraculous, also separating ultraviolet ray in great quantities, and table the top light is suddenly clear suddenly dark, then make use of a state-of-the-art and fiber-optic light to adjust automatically along with the outside sunlight strong or weak, the sunlight is similar to the open air to disinfect in addition to smelly outside, also alleging can save energy.
The environmental engineering department of the NTU living creature professor's chooses Tang to indicate, there is the controller that the auto revolves in the fiber-optic light, will follow sun irradiation angle to catch sun light;The electric light depends on sunlight, the electric power can also depend on windmill, making use of a wind power, the fan can use all day long.
As for want to use hot water to don't need to waste energy, either, and the hot water of the NTU green house doesn't use gas, burning hot water with the solar energy, the cold pipe line flows through open air to absorb solar vacuum tube, is a hot water here through a heating, again flow through a ceiling to keep sink, as long as once the faucet of home open, have hot water, the heat preservation can go to 46~50 degrees or higher all can.
And water of the swimming pool compare Taiwanese running water after filtering clean 500%, can be ready to drink, just these environmental protection science and technology nobilities are also very expensive, fiber-optic light 1150,000, 800 ws' generating electricity scene is also 150,000
Depend on a government a policy a promotion now, let environmental protection science and technology walk into everyone's house.

星期一, 5月 21, 2007

The south ice ocean carbon dioxide density is saturated!

The permafrost nature defends system to face a collapse.The world is well-known 【science 】periodical, at latest one mid-term report, south ice ocean absorption the carbon dioxide have been saturated, this to world warming to say, is snow doubtless up add frost.The year of the ten million comes, ocean and forest play a role of absorbing the Earth carbon dioxide.Among them South Pole the world of surroundings the fourth ocean, south ice ocean is the more biggest ocean 【carbon slot 】, the impersonation is hard to replace in the aspects of defering the Earth temperature a rising of role.However study lately according to 1, in the past this 20 years, the south ice ocean absorbed of carbon dioxide, reduced exactly than the expectation 30%.According to understanding, the south ice ocean receives of carbon dioxide, the amount of is equal to the total that England and Ireland produces around, the scientist thinks originally the content of the carbon dioxide increases inside air, absorbing of south ice ocean quantity would also ship rises with the tide, have never thought an observation result really not so, the south ice ocean has already advanced saturation.The caught unprepared scientist finds that contain the carbon dioxide of the bottom at the south ice ocean and have already been caused by the Earth warming of strong breeze, bring sea surface, and will become a kind of vicious cycle.So far didn't the evidence showyet, other absorb whether"carbon slot" of carbon dioxide also tend saturation or not, however a leaf knows an autumn, the scientist warns, the speed of the climate change is more more nasty than the imagination, sooner, if the mankind don't take action right away, result will hard save.
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I think the problem that should want to correct a balloon warming quickly, and avoid in our times causing the arrival of the ice and period.

The Indonesian fisherman succeeds in catching fossil fish

The Indonesian fisherman gets a chamber Ji fish of fossil class.The scientist thinks originally chamber Ji fish before 80,000,000 years destroyed completely together with dinosaur.South African coast appeared 1 in 1938.Pulled to admire Ma with son to pull the Wei sea outside the west and arrest 1 at north Su on last Saturday.They bring back the house to the fish first, afterwards neighbor with them say this fish not and usually.They send fish immediately to quarantine a fish field to the seaside 1.17 hours after, the this chamber Ji fish died.A fish professor's Ge glory says chamber Ji fish's most likely dwelling for rest at water is deeply more than 60 waters, leaving the sea water can only live for two hours, catching this time of chamber Ji fish but live outside in the sea water 17 hours break to record at last.The this chamber Ji fish grows 131 cms, heavy 51 kilograms.

Mankind in carry on in the sleep various entirely different in the physiology activity of daytime

Although to mankind sleep is the thing which takes place everyday, our understanding to sleep, few have to be pitiful.The mankind of the ancient times, not only don't understand sleep, but also fear sleep, deeply afraid a feel not to come to.Until more than 100 years ago, many scholars still kept thinking sleep is get and of dead of an excessiveness stage.Along with the progress of medical science, the scientists find mankind's body and physiology phenomenon, and will not hold still with the sleep;Anti- pour will make use of sleep, carry on various entirely different in the physiology activity of daytime.
For responding a different physiology need, see sleep for quiet night, actually but is a very rough sea.The sleep of over the night in fact by quite a few periods constitute, and each period can divide into quite a few stages again.
When the very busy pain for a day ends after, people bring droopy go to bed, whole worthy of a look, the body relaxs gradually, the activity of brain also pipes down slowly.Passing by a period of time precipitates, the brain nerve is from the shallow sleep of"fall asleep to expect", get into outward boundary to stop one's ears of"sleep a period deeply".
Through the detecting of instrument, we can see sleep a just sweet person, their brains wave by quick and slow, a tread a core which gets into sleep.Didn't in a short while of time, the brain wave accelerates suddenly, eyes beginning is or so to turn fast, appearing in the brain one by one exciting and incomparable dream world, the asleep person gets into a very special"move an eye period quickly" at this time.A period of time after, beautiful dream dissipation, the brain presents the stage of rest again, sleeping to also get into next period.The sleep of over the night spends in go up and down of the variety circulation, the variety of these physiologies, sometimes even stiller violent than the daytime.
What is the sleep ?Believe the majority can agree after understanding the variety that the sleep rises and falls up and down in the process:"sleep absolutely not only only is turn off a physiology switch, in order to rest just." sleep in occurrence of various varieties, exactly certainly have to the Heng of whole and healthy maintenance, or physiology condition what meaning, cure boundary still in the middle of decrypting gradually.
But the existence of the sleep is far from accidental, and body for maintaining this extreme complicated sleep structure, need what function and moderate, cure boundary to also inquire into a development constantly.
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No matter how it is, as long as the public can have basic understanding to the sleep, while facing"sleep obstacle", can cognize-this absolutely isn't the problem that Chien is simply single to"suffer from insomnia" two words just.

Data source:Medical science university in Taipei attaches to establish a hospital- Sleep center Lee to believe a Qian doctor

Hibernate 17 after year count 1,000,000,000 cicadas will sprout eastern spectacular sight in the United States

This monthly meeting in the west has in the United States very several 1,000,000,000 hibernated for 17 years of[hatch from eggs X]the cicada sprout, going to heaven as a fairy, will influence the local residents' life consumedly probably.
[Hatch from eggs X]the cicada hibernate a period to grow particularly, everyone doesn't know before they how long then would go to heaven as a fairy so take care of them call[hatch from eggs]unknown[X].Afterwards the entomology house found them hibernating to expect for long 17 years.
This kind of red eye, the cicada of shrimp size will not bite a person, so will not hurt a person.However, cicada after sprouting, the most important purpose wants to continue the family line.The cicada begs accidentally of the cicada blare but the meeting Rao popular God not and rather.That year, the sticky Gan in Manchu Dynasty palace is for the sake of Rao person the cicada of the pure dream sticks to down and establishes from the tree.
Hearing 1, two cicadas calls to can also write the lyrics of"listen to I chase spring water call cold" probably, but several 1,000,000 cicadas blare to call together right away outstanding.Entomology house estimate, is many places at the tree, four cent of woodland in may have 1,500,000 cicadas, call possibility with thunder about, the ordinary people all can not stand.
In addition to interjection, cicada's flying in disorder everywhere may hit a person to hit a pet, will also leave large quantity night soil to cause inconvenience.However, the protein of cicada is abundant, is the snack that birds and dog like to eat very much.

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I feel their insects all pass by to evolve so for several years, the great universe certainly has the way of reaction.

星期一, 5月 14, 2007

Operation Smile

1.Why was Operation Smile formed? Would you like to be a medical volunteer and help a child?
2.How do you think children's lives are being changed after they have surgery for cleft lips?
3.Which organization belongs to NPO in Taiwan? Can you learn from it and describe your volunteering ambition? NPO/CO NPO: Non-profit organization.